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Deviousness `anmari has been spreading her infectious positivity throughout our community for over 6 years. Throughout this time Ana has been at the core of all things devious, passionately developing an eclectic gallery, helping organise devmeets, participating in chat events and also recently completed dedicating her time as a Community Volunteer. We are absolutely delighted to bestow the Deviousness Award for May 2013 to `anmari, congratulations! Read More
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looking at these pages, and looking at other things you've made, like the NoWords enry you sent us... I must say these pages have vastly superior quality.
First of all here you have a much more distinctive style, the characters have more personality, the lineart is solid and clear, while not loosing the vivid touch.
I think you also work a lot better when you don't colour the pages with watercolour. The panels are better readable and the overall impact is much better.
I just had to say this... hope you don't mind
but... superior quality ?!?!
mmm, these pages were more like 30' daily sketches, not much effort...
as for the characters, well it's true, these are probably the only characters
I can draw that don't totally change from panel to panel !!
As for watercolouring the original pages
I begin to doubt I should ever do that again...
The original pages look pretty nice,
yet once scanned and edited they look worse...
and I don't mind at all for the comments !!
on the contrary, I wish more would make such comments...
THANK YOU !!
ps, I was thinking of sending you a copy, if you don't mind.
And about the comments, well, I tend to be a bit cautious. I have been teaching comic art for some years and I know that I tend to be quite critical (as in constructive critique of course) towards other peoples work, probably because I'm my own biggest critic. I also know that not everybody wants her or his work to be criticized, so I'm cautious.
Anyway, if you seek feedback, I'm here... and I will write you some more about the comic you send us!
will let you know
as for the critique, I understand what you mean,
sometimes people can't take it.
And yes it can be hard for other people to comment
on your flaws and weaknesses,
but this is why I became a member of DA in the first place,
and the lack of serious constructive critique
is the reason I'm disappointed being here.
So please anything you have to say in order for me
to improve is more than welcome and I truly appreciate it!!