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entangled in my private prison
my mind and my heart
are not mine anymore

i can barely find any relief
among charcoals and smudged scrapbooks

the pain grows deeper
as if every second spent in this wasteland
had absorbed every tear i'd ever shed,
just to accelerate my nervous breakdown

no movement

entwined in my own blurry thoughts
my body and my soul
i cannot claim anymore

i can hardly obtain any solace
among sentimental treasures and fading melodies

this emptiness is terrifying
as if every dream i ever had in this no-man's land
had been emulsified with every fear i'd ever felt,
just to confiscate all of the peace still left in me

no rest
©2005-2009 *neurotic-elf
:iconneurotic-elf:

Author's Comments

..nothing serious.... just some extra tension trying to find it's way out..........:(

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:iconleytosnot:
poly omorfo , m'aresoun ta sxedia sou !!

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:iconamyleerose:
how weird... I had accidently clicked a bit to quick on a dev without seeing the image on DA's front page and surprisingly it was your dev that came up O.O *freaks out*

anyway... nice image.. you're really good. I like your poem.. depechs some of the things that's still cooking up inside of me.. heh.. a good end to the poem...

just to confiscate all of the peace still left in me this single line just stuck to me..
:iconneurotic-elf:
...einai poly proxeiro skitsaki... thanx anyway..

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let me be in your dreams all i wasn't in your reality
:blackrose:
:iconneurotic-elf:
..weird things happen......... at least that wasn't that bad...right?? :p (sorry... i am in a really awful mood and wet eyes....:tears: )
the image is nothing special, believe me.. it was done in few minutes, just to fill the gap... thanx anyway...:hug:


.......i feel that way... i am too tired even to go to bed.... and i have to wake up early to go to work too..... *rolleyes*

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let me be in your dreams all i wasn't in your reality
:blackrose:
:iconneurotic-elf:
..weird things happen......... at least that wasn't that bad...right?? :p (sorry... i am in a really awful mood and wet eyes....:tears: )
the image is nothing special, believe me.. it was done in few minutes, just to fill the gap... thanx anyway...:hug:


.......i feel that way... i am too tired even to go to bed.... and i have to wake up early to go to work too..... *rolleyes*

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let me be in your dreams all i wasn't in your reality
:blackrose:
:iconneurotic-elf:
..weird things happen......... at least that wasn't that bad...right?? :p (sorry... i am in a really awful mood and wet eyes....:tears: )
the image is nothing special, believe me.. it was done in few minutes, just to fill the gap... thanx anyway...:hug:


.......i feel that way... i am too tired even to go to bed.... and i have to wake up early to go to work too..... *rolleyes*

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let me be in your dreams all i wasn't in your reality
:blackrose:
:iconamyleerose:
hehe yeah.. it was a nice surprise :giggle:

:hug:
:iconneurotic-elf:
yeeeep... it was indeed...!! :hug:

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let me be in your dreams all i wasn't in your reality
:blackrose:
:icongosia:
Intense image and poem; they go hand-in-hand. It's good that you're finding an outlet for your distress.

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