This would have made a great CD cover for latest musical creation, Asylum. Check him out when you get a chance. He writes well and is a graphic designer like you. Oh yeah, he also does graphic novels and cartoons.
anything to do with the system of a down song? ... and for what it's worth ... i don't think that you should lighten up her face ... with the chin like that ... it just means that the chin is white as it reflects the light from the light source behind the person and the eyes glow because there is light coming from inside her too ... leaving the rest dark is more dramatic too ... i don't think that you should change it